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Sentences for draft video at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AqbNtQ-P6K8
Sentences for draft video at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AqbNtQ-P6K8


Produced by Akasa Tseng, in collaboration with Michel Bauwens and Lawrence Wollersheim.
VISION Statement created by Michel Bauwens in collaboration with Lawrence Wollersheim and Akasa. Movie produced by Akasa.
 




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Here is my vision
Here is my vision


Our emerging vision   (new line or other idea?)
Our emerging vision


Together we know everything  
Together we know everything  
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Together we have everything
Together we have everything


(Each of us has and is
Each of us has and is


The right piece of the puzzle
The right piece of the puzzle
- )----------change to  Each of us
                                                                             
- Interlocks in a puzzle?. Michel: I think the old formulation is fine for me, I prefer it to the change


Alone we are a fragment
Alone we are a fragment
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Finding solutions  
Finding solutions  
- ……(what do you think about the dolphin & cow image, too humorus?). Michel: no, very original, I like it, and so did the others I showed it too


Wherever they might be
Wherever they might be
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That is the question  
That is the question  
Find it fix it or fork it
----- (new image or trim this line, too many words/different actions) . Michel: it can be deleted, as the previous two already express the idea


Motivated by passion
Motivated by passion


Striving for best quality
Striving for absolute quality
 
- why not change it to absolute quality? can also be deleted as it comes back further alone


The more connected the richer
The more connected the richer
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Life wants to be connected    (need a new image)
Life wants to be connected    (need a new image)


Everyone who cares
Leadership is caring for the whole  
 
For the whole is a leader
 
- you could change this to: Leadership is caring for the whole (reduces two phrases to one)


Power with instead of power over   
Power with instead of power over   
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More options create better choices
More options create better choices


Profit through benefit
Sharing benefits instead of taking profits


- could also be changed into: Sharing benefits instead of taking profits
Give a brick


Give a brick, get a house
Get a house


Working together for best quality       
Working together for best quality       
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Ever improving
Ever improving
From consumer to producer 
- (remove produSer ). Michel: whole phrase can be deleted, as it is repeated below


Producer and user are one       
Producer and user are one       
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Our shared vision     
Our shared vision     


- (or other idea?): could we not put: P2PFoundation.Net here??
Join Peer to Peer at
P2PFoundation.Net  
 
(yes, vision movie always comes with one website page for the statement
person, a page with music credit (I will put my website here), a page for collaborating credit, a page for photographer's credit, last page is a logo of Rocket Ship from the founder Malcolm with whom I am certified as a VISION Statement Movies coach and trainer.)
 
Please give me the photographer's name (who shoot your photo at the opening page).
I know the name of the person who did the last photo.

Revision as of 03:38, 1 April 2008

Introduction

Sentences for draft video at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AqbNtQ-P6K8

VISION Statement created by Michel Bauwens in collaboration with Lawrence Wollersheim and Akasa. Movie produced by Akasa.


Scenario

Here is my vision

Our emerging vision

Together we know everything

Together we have everything

Each of us has and is

The right piece of the puzzle

Alone we are a fragment

Together we find wholeness

Finding solutions

Wherever they might be

You are what you make

You are what you share

To join or create

That is the question

Motivated by passion

Striving for absolute quality

The more connected the richer

True wealth is in

Relationships

More views more light

Transparency brings light

Illuminates the shadows

Difference enriches

What we have in common

Information wants to be free

Culture wants to be shared

Life wants to be connected (need a new image)

Leadership is caring for the whole

Power with instead of power over

- (need a new image)

Designing exclusion into inclusion

Individuals and collectives are

Converging

- (need a new image /add motion effect)

I win

- (need a new image)

You win

- (need a new image)

We all win

More options create better choices

Sharing benefits instead of taking profits

Give a brick

Get a house

Working together for best quality

- (new lines)

Through open designs

Ever improving

Producer and user are one

Know the difference between

Scarcity and abundance

And humanity will be saved

Peer to Peer is the next

Emergence of relatedness

Me to the power of

Us

That is my vision

Our shared vision

Join Peer to Peer at P2PFoundation.Net

(yes, vision movie always comes with one website page for the statement person, a page with music credit (I will put my website here), a page for collaborating credit, a page for photographer's credit, last page is a logo of Rocket Ship from the founder Malcolm with whom I am certified as a VISION Statement Movies coach and trainer.)

Please give me the photographer's name (who shoot your photo at the opening page). I know the name of the person who did the last photo.